Could you please take a look at this?
1 Don't turn the light on brighter/stronger.
2 Kids grow/get older, there is no preventing it. You'll have to let your kids go someday.
3 Lend me money until monday/till monday. (can you say that?)
4 Like that/this way I'll know you come through for me; if I threaten the person you love.
2 setneces Im not sure of?
- I have a dump for an apartment. Its so cramped and messy.
- I know more of his friends than you so it'll be easier for me to track him down. (how would you say the first bit?)
thank you