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Marold Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
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At noon this very day I was given by my employer a load of work to be done until the evening.
Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone by chance.
During the final decisive match, there was an apparent fierce competitiveness in the air.
When I switched the TV on, my most favourite serial had been already on the air.
Please, could you have a look at the aspect of naturalness of these sentences?
Thanks in advance.
Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone by chance.
During the final decisive match, there was an apparent fierce competitiveness in the air.
When I switched the TV on, my most favourite serial had been already on the air.
Please, could you have a look at the aspect of naturalness of these sentences?
Thanks in advance.
Top answer
Too much to be natural. At noon today my boss gave me a load of work to be done before the evening. Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone.
- Too much to be natural.
- At noon today my boss gave me a load of work to be done before the evening.
- Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone.
- During the final match , there was a f ierce competitiveness in the air.
- When I switched the TV on, my favourite seria l had already started.
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Too much to be natural.
At noon today my boss gave me a load of work to be done before the evening.
Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone.
During the final match, there was a fierce competitiveness in the air.
When I switched the TV on, my favourite serial had already started.
At noon today my boss gave me a load of work to be done before the evening.
Strolling along the beach, I found a pricey mobile phone.
During the final match, there was a fierce competitiveness in the air.
When I switched the TV on, my favourite serial had already started.
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