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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

4 sentences


Could anybody correct these sentences for me?
(1) The volcano is vomitting.
(2) After the vomitting, the land around the volcano will be very fertilized.
(3) The government ask them to leave(I think there is a more appropriate word) the place, when it happened.
(4) I hope no loss of lives is caused and nobody is injured.
Many thanks in advance
  

Top answer

Erupting , not vomiting. After the eruption ... will be fertile.

  • Erupting , not vomiting.
  • After the eruption ...
  • will be fertile.
  • The government asked the local citizens to evacuate.
  • I hope there is no loss of life nor any injuries.
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Erupting, not vomiting.

After the eruption ... will be fertile.

The government asked the local citizens to evacuate.

I hope there is no loss of life nor any injuries.
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Thanks,
However, fertilize is a verb means make something fertile.
Why can't we change it into participial adjective to describe that the land is fertilized by th eruption.
Can I say after the erupting?

Many thanks in advance
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No, after the eruption, not after the erupting.

You can say the soil will be fertilzed by the eruption, but not "The soil will be very fertilized."
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You can also say: The volcanic ash fertilized the soil.
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The soil was made more fertile by the ash from the volcano.

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