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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

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Hi,


  • Responsible for communicating and supporting distributors in New York and Atlanta.
  • Traveled domestically in Asia to meet with potential clients and distributors to discuss projects.

  • Generated leads and secured new business through promoting a broad range of medical equipment and supplies; developed key relationships with industry buyers, distributors and hospital patients.

  • Provided exceptional customer service and sales support as a contributing team member.
  • Thanks
Please proofread these points for me.

Thanks you very much.
  

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No periods after incomplete sentences - Was responsible for communicating with and supporting distributors in New York and Atlanta - Traveled in Asia to meet with potential clients and distributors to discuss projects - Generated leads and secured new business by promoting a broad range of medical equipment and supplies - Developed key relationships with industry buyers, distributors and hospital patients - Provided exceptional customer service and sales support as a contributing team member

  • No periods after incomplete sentences - Was responsible for communicating with and supporting distributors in New York and Atlanta - Traveled in Asia to meet with potential clients and distributors to discuss projects - Generated leads and secured new business by promoting a broad range of medical equipment and supplies - Developed key relationships with industry buyers, distributors and hospital patients - Provided exceptional customer service and sales support as a contributing team member
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No periods after incomplete sentences

- Was responsible for communicating with and supporting distributors in New York and Atlanta
- Traveled in Asia to meet with potential clients and distributors to discuss projects
- Generated leads and secured new business by promoting a broad range of medical equipment and supplies
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