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4-day vacation

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Last summer, my family took a 4-day vacation to Hong Kong and Macao. We stayed two days in Hong Kong and two days in Macao. Hong Kong is a city for tourism, which is known as a fine place for entertainment, shopping, recreation and food. Visiting this modern metropolis, we could feel its vibrancy and have a good understanding of the local culture.
  

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Last summer, my family took a 4-day vacation to Hong Kong and Macao. We stayed two days in Hong Kong and two days in Macao. Hong Kong is a city for tourism.

  • Last summer, my family took a 4-day vacation to Hong Kong and Macao.
  • We stayed two days in Hong Kong and two days in Macao.
  • Hong Kong is a city for tourism.
  • It is known as a fine place for entertainment, shopping, recreation and food.
  • Visiting this modern metropolis, we could feel its vibrancy and have a good understanding of the local culture.
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Last summer, my family took a 4-day vacation to Hong Kong and Macao. We stayed two days in Hong Kong and two days in Macao. Hong Kong is a city for tourism. It is known as a fine place for entertainment, shopping, recreation and food. Visiting this modern metropolis, we could feel its vibrancy and have a good understanding of the local culture.

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