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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
4 awkward sentences could you please correct?
Could you please help me correct these 3 sentences if they are wrong?
1 I'm not going to let where I am determine what I do. I'll do what I do at home at work.
2 I didn't notice it almost fell./I didn't notice something was falling.
3 Apart from the fact that I'm lazy, there are other things that make it that you have to come to me and not me to you.
4 it's not a coincidence that he change the data so as to get the desired results/the data to get the desired results/so he would get the desired results.
Thank you
1 I'm not going to let where I am determine what I do. I'll do what I do at home at work.
2 I didn't notice it almost fell./I didn't notice something was falling.
3 Apart from the fact that I'm lazy, there are other things that make it that you have to come to me and not me to you.
4 it's not a coincidence that he change the data so as to get the desired results/the data to get the desired results/so he would get the desired results.
Thank you
Top answer
) 3 make it necessary for you to come to me and not me to you 4 all three work
- ) 3 make it necessary for you to come to me and not me to you 4 all three work
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1 'or at work'
2 I didn't notice that it was about to fall(?)
3 make it necessary for you to come to me and not me to you
4 all three work
2 I didn't notice that it was about to fall(?)
3 make it necessary for you to come to me and not me to you
4 all three work
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Revision for # 1:
I refuse to allow my location to determine my behavior. I function equally well at home as I do in the office.
These sentences for these reasons:
1. Your vocabulary choices are too simple. Choice more precise, higher-level words. "My location" is a better choice for "where I am," and "my behavior" is a better choice than "what I do." Out of 21 word
I refuse to allow my location to determine my behavior. I function equally well at home as I do in the office.
These sentences for these reasons:
1. Your vocabulary choices are too simple. Choice more precise, higher-level words. "My location" is a better choice for "where I am," and "my behavior" is a better choice than "what I do." Out of 21 word
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