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How can good housing architecture improve the quality of life for Korean people?



When building a house, one of the most important considerations is how well the housing architecture would suit to the conditions of the society where the house is being built. In case of Korea, there are three essential housing architectures which have an effect on improving the quality of life for Korean: high-rise buildings, underground parking lots and south-facing houses.

First, as a consequence of high-rise buildings, the housing shortage problem has resolved in metropolitan area in the country and shortened the commute. Because more and more Koreans have come to the cities hoping for better work and pay, certain cities have suffered from the overpopulation. In 2006, Korean government alleviated the restriction of high-rise building that allows constructing higher than 15-story building. Due to it's advantages that it accommodates quite a number of people in a limited site, Koreans are less stressful on commuting far distances from their work to home.

Second, due to the underground parking lots, the resident, especially children, are freed from the accidents which occur in a housing complex. Instead of driving cars on earth, there is a garden and a play ground. On top of that, residents do not need to check around them if there is a car coming in the complex. Thanks to the underground parking garage, the residents are more safe now.

Third, as a result of a house with a southern exposure, Koreans are able to reduce the bills of heating and electricity. Korea has four distinctive seasons. For this reason, the people use an air-conditioner in summer and a heater in winter. Orienting a living room and a main room of a house toward the south means that the rooms receive a lot of sun during the day and don't need to use lighting equipment as well as heating system this time. As a result, housing architecture which faces to the south lessens the living expenses of Korean.

There might be other housing architectures that affect the quality of Korean people's life, housing architectures of high-rise buildings, underground parking lots and south-facing houses certainly raise the quality of life for Koreans.