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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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3 sentences read online

I read these 3 sentences online and wanted to check with you and see if they are correct?

There have been market crashes in FUT that have caused player prices to more than halve in value overnight.

Isn't it demand of a player? Is it incorrect to say "operate on these forces"?

A FIFA 17 market crash occurs due to anything that changes the supply or demand for a player or consumable. Just like a real-world economy, the FIFA 17 transfer market operates on these forces.

Is the first sentence unnatural?

This wedding took a lot of firsts of our list: first time shooting in a former world war bunker (vju im Energiebunker), first time live surf / punk band, first time listening to The Clash’s “I fought the law” as opening song for the dance night. All the rest, see for yourself.

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Anonymous There have been market crashes in FUT that have caused player prices to more than halve in value overnight. "in value" should be deleted (a price does not have a value). Otherwise it is OK, provided that "in FUT", which I am not familiar with, makes sense.

  • Anonymous There have been market crashes in FUT that have caused player prices to more than halve in value overnight.
  • "in value" should be deleted (a price does not have a value).
  • Otherwise it is OK, provided that "in FUT", which I am not familiar with, makes sense.
  • Anonymous A FIFA 17 market crash occurs due to anything that changes the supply or demand for a player or consumable.
  • Just like a real-world economy, the FIFA 17 transfer market operates on these forces.
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AnonymousThere have been market crashes in FUT that have caused player prices to more than halve in value overnight.
"in value" should be deleted (a price does not have a value). Otherwise it is OK, provided that "in FUT", which I am not familiar with, makes sense.
AnonymousA FIFA 17 market crash occurs due to anything that chang

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