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Mumi-girl Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

3 sentences: please correct my grammar

Can you please correct my grammar in these sentences:

They shall eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food with the family and become aware of the situation of other places in the world.

  

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They eat nourishing and tasty food with their families? and become aware of the situation elsewhere in the world. In third world countries , the situation is a whole lot different.

— Mister Micawber

  • They eat nourishing and tasty food with their families?
  • and become aware of the situation elsewhere in the world.
  • In third world countries , the situation is a whole lot different.
  • Millions of children don't get their daily calorie needs , and thousands die of hunger.
  • Their biggest problem is undernourishment.
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They eat nourishing and tasty food with their families? and become aware of the situation elsewhere in the world.

In third world countries, the situation is a whole lot different. Millions of children don't get their daily calorie needs, and thousands die of hunger.

Their biggest problem is undernourishment.
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Mister MicawberThey eat nourishing and tasty food with their families? and become aware of the situation elsewhere in the world.

In third world countries, the situation is a whole lot different. Millions of children don't get their daily calorie needs, and thousands die of hunger.

Their biggest problem is
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mumi-girlfor example the last sentance:

For them, the biggest problem is undernourishment because of the lack of food.
Undernourishment means to be weak or unhealthy because you have not had enough food, or the proper food.
So why to say ( undernourishment because of the lack of food ) when the word "
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YoungBuddy
mumi-girlfor example the last sentance:

For them, the biggest problem is undernourishment because of the lack of food.

Undernourishment means to be weak or unhealthy because you have not had enough food, or the proper food.

So why to say ( undernourishment because of the lack of food ) when the wo
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mumi-girlokay thanks (: but if i say: "For them, the biggest problem is undernourishment because of the lack of food." is the grammar correct?  

and could you help me with the other 2 sentences:

They shall eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food with their families and becom
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