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Marold Posted 14 years ago
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"A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the family, long-lasting relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world. There can be no doubt that unless we are in touch with the friends quite frequently, the friedship is highly likely to be restricted to emails or text messages which lack depth and which are then prone to be destroyed. And yet, people still disregard that."

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Marold "A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the family, long-lasting relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world. There can be no doubt that unless we are in touch with the friends quite frequently, the friedship is highly likely to be restricted to emails or text messages which lack depth and which are then prone to be destroyed. " A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the long-lasting family relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world.

— CalifJim

  • Marold "A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the family, long-lasting relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world.
  • There can be no doubt that unless we are in touch with the friends quite frequently, the friedship is highly likely to be restricted to emails or text messages which lack depth and which are then prone to be destroyed.
  • " A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the long-lasting family relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world.
  • There can be no doubt that unless we are in touch with the friends quite frequently, the frie n dship is highly likely to be restricted to emails or text messages which lack depth and which are then prone to be ing destroyed.
  • And yet, people still disregard that.
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Marold"A further point is that friendships are rather short-lived compared to the family, long-lasting relationships which are one of the few constants we can truly rely upon in this unstable world. There can be no doubt that unless we are in touch with the friends quite frequently, the friedship is highly likely to be restricted to emails or text messages which lack dept
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Thank you very much, CalifJim.Emotion: smile
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