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Newguest Posted 18 years ago
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001.On the day of September 15, 2007 in XXX the Sales Agreement has been concluded between:........................ IS IT OK TO WRITE "HAS BEEN"?02br
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002. The subject of the Agreement shall be issued to the Buyer in the original 01b00producer’s packaging02b02br
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003. The payment day shall be the day of debiting the Buyer’s account02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 00I'm a teacher, and not a lawyer. On the day of September 15, 2007 in *** the Sales Agreement has been concluded between:.. 02br 02br 00On September 15, 2007, in *** , the Sales Agreement was concluded between:..

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I'm a teacher, and not a lawyer.
  • On the day of September 15, 2007 in *** the Sales Agreement has been concluded between:..
  • 02br 02br 00On September 15, 2007, in *** , the Sales Agreement was concluded between:..
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  • 02b 00 00Seems OK02font 02br 02br 01font 003.
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0Hi,02br
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01font001.On the day of September 15, 2007 in *** the Sales Agreement has been concluded between:.. IS IT OK TO WRITE "HAS BEEN"?02font00 No.02br
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10I think it is the Legal English area of the Forum 05002br
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01cite10Clive12cite11font102. The subject of the Agreement shall be issued to the Buyer in the original 11b10producer’s packaging.12b10 10Seems OK12font12br
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10I know that the word "subject" in this sentence refers to the goods to be d
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21font202. The subject of the Agreement shall be issued to the Buyer in the original 21b20producer’s packaging.22b20 21font20Seems OK22font22font
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0I just say that from a legal point of view (not taking into account the linguistic one) it may be confusing to use "subject" when referring to "object"-you may be obliged to deliver yourself packed in a box to the Buyer050010id4
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0 If you want to avoid any confusion, your wording could be "The product that is the subject of this Agreement...". 0-
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