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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

3 sentence need help with please?

Could someone help me with this sentence? please

1 My credit card withdrawals didn't appear on my back account right away and in the meantime I had deposited money into my account. So my balance read more than I actually had since the bank hadn't taken into account my latest withdrawals and since I owed an establishment some money they seized what I owed them. Basically because of the lag between when I withdrew money from my account and the transaction appeared on my account, I found myself overdrawn and paying fees to the bank.

and these two I'm not sure of

1 money transfer from account to account are overnighted/are done overnight.
2 You're nickname and picture doesn't correspond to the way you play. You're nickname is "generousplayer3" yet its very hard to get all your chips. You should be called "cheapplayer3".
(is correspond the right word?)

thank you
  

Top answer

They are paragraphs more than sentences. " several sentences together are called a paragraph. In paragraph 1.

— DougLewis

  • They are paragraphs more than sentences.
  • " several sentences together are called a paragraph.
  • In paragraph 1.
  • It is an issue of timing between depositing into an account and taking money out.
  • Because of the timing error funds were withdrawn before the deposit was added.
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They are paragraphs more than sentences. A sentence ends when there is a period "."
several sentences together are called a paragraph.

In paragraph 1. It is an issue of timing between depositing into an account and taking money out. Because of the timing error funds were withdrawn before the deposit was added. This resulted in being "overdrawn" on the account resulting in unfair fees
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THank you, Your corrections might look good on paper but if you were to say it to someone like that it wouldn't sound to natural?

How would you say the 3 sentences without rewording them too much?

thank you so much

alc
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I am sorry.

I thought you were having difficulty understanding what the items mean. What you are looking for is how to say them to someone so they can be understood easily.

Is that correct?
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Yes please, how would say that in spoken without rewxording them too much.

thank you
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You could try replacing correspond with "match" or "suite"
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OK thanks , and for the withdrawal paragraph had would you say it? and is it overnighted or done overnight, how would you say?

thanks
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I would say "happen overnight" probably, if I were speaking it.

Of course, you need to re-phrase the sentence(s) to fit the suggestions in properly.
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I tried doing it, but I'm having trouble rephrasing, could you help me rephrase it maybe?

thanks a million

alex
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Probably like this.

Money transfers from account to account, happen overnight.
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thanks but I was talking about the first paragraph thing?

thanks again douglewis.
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