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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
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3) how do you make it better?
0 there is a much-needed demand for music curriculum reform and arts curriculum reform. Arts education, undoubtedly, is an effective way of providing creative education. Through Arts education, students are able to creatively and flexibly learn aestheticism. Unfortunately, Arts education has long been neglected. In 2000, the CDC claimed that 00 the problems of arts education were.....(not finished) 02 br
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0 I'd change it slightly to : 02 br
00 "There is a significant demand for reforming music and arts curriculums." or 02 br
00 "There is a strong need expressed for reforming music and arts curriculums". 02 br
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00 "Arts education is undoubtedly an effective way of providing creative skills" or "creative techniques". 02 br
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00 "There is a significant demand for reforming music and arts curriculums." or 02 br
00 "There is a strong need expressed for reforming music and arts curriculums". 02 br
00 Then I'd go : 02 br
00 "Arts education is undoubtedly an effective way of providing creative skills" or "creative techniques". 02 br
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