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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
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3 Antis
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From this year on, a massive exercise simulating real combating scenarios has been put on stage by the Airport (Public) Security with the focus on ''3 Antis"and "1 Response", namely "antihijacking, anti-bombing, anti-sabotage" and "Emergency Response". The all-around competence in safeguarding the aviation security and combating capacities of all the security officers have been greatly enhanced in this all-mobilised campaign featured with combating skills and strategies.
From this year on, a massive exercise simulating real combating scenarios has been put on stage by the Airport (Public) Security with the focus on ''3 Antis"and "1 Response", namely "antihijacking, anti-bombing, anti-sabotage" and "Emergency Response". The all-around competence in safeguarding the aviation security and combating capacities of all the security officers have been greatly enhanced in this all-mobilised campaign featured with combating skills and strategies.
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From this year on, a massive exercise, simulating real combating scenarios, has been put on stage by the Airport (Public) Security, focusing on "3 Antis" (anti-hijacking, anti-bombing, and anti-sabatage) and "1 Response" (Emergency Response). This all-mobilised campaign (featured with combating skills and stragegies) has greatly enhanced the all-around competence of all the security officers in safeguarding the aviation security and improved their combating capacities.
- From this year on, a massive exercise, simulating real combating scenarios, has been put on stage by the Airport (Public) Security, focusing on "3 Antis" (anti-hijacking, anti-bombing, and anti-sabatage) and "1 Response" (Emergency Response).
- This all-mobilised campaign (featured with combating skills and stragegies) has greatly enhanced the all-around competence of all the security officers in safeguarding the aviation security and improved their combating capacities.
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From this year on, a massive exercise, simulating real combating scenarios, has been put on stage by the Airport (Public) Security, focusing on "3 Antis" (anti-hijacking, anti-bombing, and anti-sabatage) and "1 Response" (Emergency Response). This all-mobilised campaign (featured with combating skills and stragegies) has greatly enhanced the all-around competence of all the security officers in
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Jobb, the verb tenses don't quite make sense in terms of the time frame mentioned and the nature of a security exercise. I have set it as a future event, but I am certainly not sure that is what you intend. I need more information on the dates involved. Is this to be an annual exercise?
"This year, a massive exercise simulating real combat scenarios will be staged by Airport (Public)
"This year, a massive exercise simulating real combat scenarios will be staged by Airport (Public)
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MM, it refers to:
In 2004, massive exercises have been staged...
so I rewrote you rewriting as below, okay?
"This year, massive exercises simulating real combat scenarios have been staged by Airport (Public) Security, focussing on 'Three Antis' (anti-hijacking, anti-bombing, anti-sabotage) and 'One Response' (emergency response). This fully mobilised campaign fea
In 2004, massive exercises have been staged...
so I rewrote you rewriting as below, okay?
"This year, massive exercises simulating real combat scenarios have been staged by Airport (Public) Security, focussing on 'Three Antis' (anti-hijacking, anti-bombing, anti-sabotage) and 'One Response' (emergency response). This fully mobilised campaign fea
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Yes, that's fine, Jobb. (I will avoid going into the point that 2004 is now last year.)
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