2.19would you check my essay

Question

0  A restrant in my neighborhood reminds us amusing and enjoyable generally, because it involves atomosphere of delicious food, conversation with friends or family. Where I live, in Japan, in every weekend, many people visit restrants. However, personally I oppose constraction of restrant if it will build in my neighborhood for the following reasons.02br00 My primary reason is that a new restrant causes the many quantity of traffic, especially evening. For example, My home is located in countrysde. in evening, on the way home, I will have to consider quantity of traffic if a restrant will be constracted in my neighborhood. Spending leisure time after school or work, people will drive to the restrant, so that I won't excuse trouble of increasing quantity of traffic. My leisure time, on the contrary, reduces for congested road. However, my present situation without many quantity of traffic keeps me smooth in commuting. I do not have to warry about time to reach home.02br00 Another reason is that constraction of reatrant may attract some undesirable customers around restrants. One example of this is that a restrant is the place where various kinds people visit. Some of them may be rude: some hang around, smoking outside of restrant, some entertaine business acquaintances there or some act up, making noise. A restrant might not only give inhabitants around it gives bad image but also make them have difficult in living there. Also, I, if anything, prefer quiet atmosphere of countryside, namely I prefer to smell nature such as soil and tree, hear natural sound such as wind and rain. However, the increase of people for constraction of a restrant definitely causes noisy environment by undesirable customers.02br00 My primary considerations with respect to wether a new restrant should be constracted in my neighborhood or not are wether to be able to keep traffic quantity and wether to be able to avoid undesirable people in my neighborhood. Therefore, I strongly oppose constraction of a new restrant.                  0-

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

0Hi Nik, You have a few words that you have mis-spelt throughout and I have highlighted those in blue for you. Other than that, this does need quite a few corrections. You are missing quite a few 'the's 'a's and 'an's for a start.02br
02br
00A 00restrant00 in my neighborhood reminds us amusing and enjoyable generally, because it involves 00atomosphere00 of delicious food, conversation with friends or family. Where I live, in Japan, in every weekend, many people visit restrants. However, personally I oppose 01font00constraction02font00 of restrant if it will build in my neighborhood for the following reasons.02br
00 My primary reason is that a new restrant causes the many quantity of traffic, especially evening. For example, My home is located in countrysde. in evening, on the way home, I will have to consider quantity of traffic if a restrant will be constracted in my neighborhood. Spending leisure time after school or work, people will drive to the restrant, so that I won't excuse trouble of increasing quantity of traffic. My leisure time, on the contrary, reduces for congested road. However, my present situation without many quantity of traffic keeps me smooth in commuting. I do not have to 00warry 00about time to reach home.02br
00 Another reason is that constraction of reatrant may attract some undesirable customers around restrants. One example of this is that a restrant is the place where various kinds people visit. Some of them may be rude: some hang around, smoking outside of restrant, some 00entertaine00 business acquaintances there or some act up, making noise. A restrant might not only give inhabitants around it gives bad image but also make them have difficult in living there. Also, I, if anything, prefer quiet atmosphere of countryside, namely I prefer to smell nature such as soil and tree, hear natural sound such as wind and rain. However, the increase of people for constraction of a restrant definitely causes noisy environment by undesirable customers.02br
00 My primary considerations with respect to 00wether00 a new restrant should be constracted in my neighborhood or not are wether to be able to keep traffic quantity and wether to be able to avoid undesirable people in my neighborhood. Therefore, I strongly oppose constraction of a new restrant. 0-

Silversamand · Answer

0 A 01font00restaurant02font00 00in00 my neighborhood reminds us 01i01font00amusing and enjoyable (memories or times...) generally02font02i00, because it involves atomosphere of delicious food, conversation with friends or family. Where I live, in Japan, in every weekend, many people visit restrants. However, personally I would oppose construction of restrant if it built in my neighborhood for the following reasons.02br
00 My primary reason is that a new restrant causes many 01font01i00quantity02i02font00 of traffic, especially evenings. For example, My home is located in countryside. in evening, on the way 01font00to02font00 home, I will have to consider quantity of traffic if a restrant be constracted in my neighborhood. Spending leisure time after school or work, people will drive to the restrant, so that I won't excuse trouble of increasing quantity of traffic. My leisure time, contrary, is reduced for congested road. However, my present situation without many quantity of traffic keeps me smooth in commuting. I do not have to worry about time to reach home.02br
00 Another reason is that constraction of reatrant may attract some undesirable customers around restrants. One example of this is that a restrant is the place where various kinds people visit. Some of them may be rude: some hang around, smoking outside of restrant, some entertaine business acquaintances there or some act up, making noise. A restrant might not only give inhabitants around it gives bad image but also make them have difficult in living there. Also, I, if anything, prefer quiet atmosphere of countryside, namely I prefer to smell nature such as soil and tree, hear natural sound such as wind and rain. However, the increase of people for constraction of a restrant definitely causes noisy environment by undesirable customers.02br
00 My primary considerations with respect to wether a new restrant should be constracted in my neighborhood or not are wether to be able to keep traffic quantity and wether to be able to avoid undesirable people in my neighborhood. Therefore, I strongly oppose constraction of a new restrant. 0-

2.19would you check my essay

Top answer

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

Related Questions