2.12 would you check my essay if there is any mistake as English expression
0 People may think that whoever lives near people as neighborhoods makes no defference to them. Where I live in Japan, the chance of communication among neighborhoods tends to reduce. However, I if I had to decide qualities of neighborhoods, I would say that they are people, who have coooperative personality, and who is social, having kowledge of various things.02br 00 My primary reason is that cooperative person would help me in the case of trouble, and advises me with abundant knowlede related to life. One example of this is that life is accompanieed by occasional trouble; my life is not exception, either. If a person familiar with anticrime knowledge lives in the neighborhood of me, asking him measure of it, I can prepare environment against crime such as sneak thief by setting up equipments for crime prevention. Also, coorative neighborhood is familiar with other various things, and advise me about cooking, geography and other various things. Those informations are all important for life; my life will come to be full. However, without cooperate person in my neighborhood, I have to ask some dealer which and where equipment I should set up for the case of consideration of crime prevention; besides, life would be inconvenient because there is not anybody who is familiar with things.02br 00 Another reason is that with a social person, who is good at communication my life will be more enjoyable. For example, in usual life, stress is attendant on my job. To get through it, I make it a rule to talk to people in sympathy with me in private. The better at communicaton a neighborhood is, the more I am so into a talk to him. If there is a person around my home, I can refresh my mind by talking to him, and I leave for company with refreshed mind next day. Also, a social person has various relationship in his life. Paling with him, I may also have a chance to increase my personal relationship. Increased reationship would offer me not only communicaton to talk but also to play sports or to travel. However, If there is anybody to talk to, it is a big deal for me. In addtion to stress built up, my pesonal relationship will remain poor.02br 00 Therefore, I think that neighborhoods are better if they are cooperative and social. In my opinion, with people, who help me lead a life and, who has good communication skill, I will spend my life better. 0-
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