To avoid the awkwardness of two when s, I'd change one of them and also move it away from the other when , thus: When I start working for that company, you'll be going to work at the same time I'm just getting home. CJ
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alc241 How am I supposed to believe you when you say that when you can in even respect/honor the most banal promises.I'm not sure what you're trying to say, so it's hard to say how Iwould say it. Besides, I wouldn't use the word "banal" in a million years!
alc24 How am I supposed to believe you when you say "xxxxxx" when you can't even honor the promise you made me.OK. We usually say "keep the promise you made", but "honor the promise ..." is also OK.
alc241 I love it when the house is clean when people come over.This one's not completely awful, but you could rephrase it a
alc24"I hate when I salivate while I'm sleeping.Not really. The closer the repetition is, the less natural it will seem, no matter which word you repeat in the same sentence.TheWith 2 whens the sentences don't sound natural do they?