It's OK, but if you want to avoid using two whens change the second one to whilst. Rover
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khoff"Whilst"? I don't think I've ever heard anyone outside of a Shakespeare play say "whilst."Well, Rover uses it, and so do I. We are, however, both British and neither of us is in the first blush of youth. You can use 'while' if you prefer.