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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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2 whens

Is it correct to have 2 when or should I get rid of one?

This is the face he makes when his mom calls him when he is in bed.

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How would you make it nice please?
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This is the face he makes when his mother calls him in bed
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Does this mean he is in bed when she calls him?
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AnonymousDoes this mean he is in bed when she calls him?
Do you think that I would change the meaning of your sentence?
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