2) Does someone would help me please to correct my travel diary?

Today already 2 days passed from Christmas.
Since I said Mrc to move out yesterday, I had to pack up every stuff early before 6am. I already said Vra to good-bye and took up Mrc's car. One of the interesting thing is, after I made a decision to quit working, the behavior of the Wstn family had slightly changed. First of all they didn't gave me any free beers and asked me to move my sit to the other side when the time I take dinner and car.

After getting the market that Mrc decided to open his cheese store (Mrc was going to go to the market at that morning.), (*does the comma comes the end of the )? or just had to go to the right before the store? like store, ( ??????? ) he showed me the place to get the 'Transwa' and started to prepare his stuff for his store.

I met Cn at there. He was one of the bus driver(I don't know the proper word to describe) of the Transwa branch of Geraldton and allow me to get inside to his office. Since it was one of the warm weather in December, I was really happy to meet the air conditioning system. I had a cup of coffee with milk and sugar and it was good as well.

But the most impressive part is I've never met that kind of people before. I mean in my entire life. He always try to make other people comfortable and do some jokes. And seemed like generous and kind person to others. For about 2 hours, after I sit his office, several people had visited his office for each reasons. Every time he greeted these people with some kind manners and I really envy his attitude. When the time he do some small talk, he always have both hilarious and polite manner. Even if I felt nervous about go back to Perth, I felt comfortable for that 2 hours.

He doesn't said any special words. Just asked me that how old am I, how is my family, and is my hometown is a fine place to visit and some everyday life and struggles. But somehow I just become comfortable. It was a very short moment, but I soon started to remember this old man. Someday I wish I could become the person who make the others (even if the others are strangers) comfortable and have some bright eyes like him.

To their kind help I could easily catch up the bus. Besides Mrc also introduced me to Pll, one of the Woofing host in Geraldton farm. Although not as good as cln, he seemed to be also a good man though.

So that's the whole story why I came to the Old castle Barrack hostel for only 10 days after arriving in Australia.

What I've been thinking in my short journey is that I could become a more active person and has to be a reliable person by myself. (to myself is right? or by myself is the correct word?) And I felt some kinds of RULE in this country. It is not such a cultural difference: In the end, every society has their rules - Huge, Strong, Invisible Rules - and someone who wants to visit must follow this guidelines that comes from other citizens' behaviour.