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Cogar Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

1 sentence or break up into 2 for clarity?

Hello,

How can I write the sentence for better clarity? Thanks.

I have given the ball, which had a little damage and which I had bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.
  

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Hi, How can I write the sentence for better clarity? Thanks. I have given the ball, which had a little damage and which I had bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.

— Clive

  • Hi, How can I write the sentence for better clarity?
  • Thanks.
  • I have given the ball, which had a little damage and which I had bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.
  • I gave the ball, which had a little damage and which I bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.
  • I've adjusted your tenses.
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Hi,

How can I write the sentence for better clarity? Thanks.

I have given the ball, which had a little damage and which I had bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.

I gave the ball, which had a little damage and which I bought in England last year, to Tom yesterday.

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