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Mumi-girl Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

1 sentence: check my grammar please

Hi Emotion: smile

Can you check my grammar in this sentence:

Obesity is a serious problem in the industrialized world, both with children and adults.
  

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Obesity for both children and adults is a serious problem in the industrialized world.

— Mister Micawber

  • Obesity for both children and adults is a serious problem in the industrialized world.
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Obesity for both children and adults is a serious problem in the industrialized world.
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You could say simply
child and adult obesity is a serious/real problem in the industrialized world.
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I would use 'in' with obesity - "Obesity in children and adults..."
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