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An area of countryside which i extremely impress is my home town. It is Phu Yen province that has special features are rich in natural resources. My home town have several natural view of neglected beauty. Here has huge rice field meandering river and big sea where have clean natural environment. People live farming main warrant who have to work at full to earn money. However, people have optimistic life more and more. I feel comfortable when i living in this native land.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The lowercase letter "i" is not a valid English pronoun. When you refer to yourself, always write "I."

An area of countryside which i extremely impress (wrong verb form) is my home town. It is Phu Yen province that has special features that (the relative pronoun "that" is necessary here) are rich in natural resources. My home town have (wrong verb form) several natural view (singular/plural error) of neglected beauty. Here (missing subject) has huge rice field (missing punctuation) meandering river and a (You need the indefinite article here.) big sea where (missing subject) have clean natural environment. People live farming main warrant (wrong words) who have to work at full (wrong words) to earn money. However, people have optimistic life (singular/plural error) more and more. I feel comfortable when i living (wrong verb form) in this native land.

David Hatton · Answer

I'll change it a sentence at a time and add comments as I go!

aqua paint 346An area of countryside which i I really love is around my home town.

I've chosen 'around' as your town is not countryside whereas the greenery in it and around it could rightly be called countryside. 'Impress' is the wrong word - you can be 'impressed by...' or you can 'impress upon someone' if you are making them understand something. If you wanted to make it sound more natural, try 'I really love the area of countryside around my home town.'

aqua paint 346 It is Phu Yen province, which has special features and is rich in natural resources.

I'm not sure this really sounds natural though. What do you mean by 'special features'?

aqua paint 346My home town ~~have~~ has several natural views of neglected beauty.

I think I understand your sentiment; you need 'has' rather than 'have' as there is only one town.

aqua paint 346There are huge rice fields, a meandering river and a big sea, which are all clean, natural environments.

You can't use 'here has...' in the same way as 'here are'. Punctuation helps to make the sentence more readable.

aqua paint 346The people living there work very hard as farmers to earn a living.

Your original sentence lacked recognisable structure in English.

aqua paint 346However, people are becoming increasingly optimistic.

Your original was understandable but didn't sound natural.

aqua paint 346I feel comfortable when I am living in my native land.

It's your native land, so say so. Be careful to always use 'I' rather than 'i' when using it as a word on its own.

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