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John Roy Posted 9 years ago
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Hi everybody, can you guys correct me on these couple sentences ? Im not sure if there are mistakes or not:

- Golden Timepieces has only the finest gold watches in an exclusive range of fashion as we believe it is crucial to stand out with elegance and simplicity.

-Aesthetic gold design accessories

Thanks a lot for helping me, Im really looking forward to improve my english to the next level.
  

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Golden Timepieces, has only the finest gold watches, in an exclusive range of fashion as we believe it is crucial to stand out with Elegance and Simplicity. -Aesthetic Gold Design Accessories

— Anonymous

  • Golden Timepieces, has only the finest gold watches, in an exclusive range of fashion as we believe it is crucial to stand out with Elegance and Simplicity.
  • -Aesthetic Gold Design Accessories
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Golden Timepieces, has only the finest gold watches, in an exclusive range of fashion as we believe it is crucial to stand out with Elegance and Simplicity.

-Aesthetic Gold Design Accessories
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Golden timepieces has.... fashion, as we believe it Is crucial...
The second one's okay, unless the gold is aesthetic - related, the design is golden, etc.
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John Roy Hi everybody, can you guys someone correct me on these couple sentences please? I'm not sure if there are mistakes in them or not.
John RoyGolden Timepieces has only the finest gold watches in an exclusive range of fashion as we believe it is crucial to stand
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Looking forward to doING something
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Anonymous Looking forward to doING something
Quite right.
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teechrI'm really looking forward to improving my English.
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i am clear the lesson thankyou
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