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Martinfailseeker Posted 10 years ago
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Hello, I was recommended to check this question for deficiencies. Allegedly, it could be improved, Do you have some tips? Emotion: smile Thanks a lot!

We are one of the most recognised global consultancy companies in the world, and provide sophisticated services to our clients in the area accountancy, taxation management consultancy, insurance, marketing and finance as well.
  

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martinfailseeker Hello, Someone recommended that I check this question for deficiencies. You didn't submit a question. Was that an oversight?

— AlpheccaStars

  • martinfailseeker Hello, Someone recommended that I check this question for deficiencies.
  • You didn't submit a question.
  • Was that an oversight?
  • We are one of the most recognised global consultancy companies in the world, providing sophisticated services to our clients in the area accountancy, taxation management consultancy , insurance, marketing and finance as well .
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martinfailseekerHello, Someone recommended that I check this question for deficiencies.
You didn't submit a question. Was that an oversight?

We are one of the most recognised global consultancy companies in the world, providing sophisticated services to our clients in the area accountancy, taxation mana
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My mistake, sorry for that.

It's not a question but just short text from a letter.


Can i ask you for revision of this text as well?
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Your statement leaves a lot to the imagination. Interns work 4 hours a day, get free meals, and some travel reimbursed. What is the salary? Besides creating reports, are there any other duties?

The internships that are on offer are in marketing, finance and the human resources department. One of the duties is creating reports for human resources. The work schedule is 6 hours a day which
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AlpheccaStarsYour statement leaves a lot to the imagination.
I take is as a compliment!

Thanks for your feedback and answer.
I didn't mention the salary and any other duties.
It's a letter that I wrote to test myself. I tryt to test myself for CAE exam.
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martinfailseekerI take is as a compliment!
Well, when you write a business communication, it is best to write clearly and completely, such that you anticipate the reader's questions and answer them in the text. Otherwise, the reader will reply with lots of questions.

In your text, as a reader, I would ask:
Which meals are paid for?
Will my h
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