Study the sentences of the following paragraph. For each one if it is
ineffective, show what is wrong, and propose a corrected version that
eliminates ineffective natures of these texts.
The price of the first prototype of the computer was unaffordable
and the results of its first test was a total surprise. While early
computers were the size of a big room, they were enormous
compared to modern computers of the same speed. What appears
to be a violation of all basics is the processing unit whose
efficiency exceeds one 100%. The circulation of the information by
the computer became very popular these days. It is our work.