0
LeGion12359 Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Could you please tell me if the above 'Cover Letter' is grammatical, idiomatic and properly wriitten?
Dear Sir/ Madam,
As I grew older, I got interested in studying civil engineering, simultaneously, fixing my goal for severing the humanity through its numerous areas scattered over the world. Thus, I studied harder and got admission in the most reputed engineering institution of my city,ABCD university. In second year of my engineering, I started developing thirst for learning construction, planning and management. I also acquired knowledge of some relevant software in parallel. My undergraduate program came to an end in 2013 when I passed successfully with first division. I came to know about this wonderful' Management Trainee job' through a social networking site.
I am sure I am the right candidate for handling the responsibilities of this job determinedly. I was appointed as a 'Trainee Engineer' at a private builder, where I gained experience of approximately a year in residential construction work, including quantity, cost estimation and quality assurance. I have the eagerness and following expertise required to carry out the job properly:
1) Knowledge of drafting and planning software like, AutoCad 2D and 3D, and Primavera P6 respectively.
2) Billing and quantity estimation in construction work.
3) Experience in construction site supervision.
As your organization is one of the world's leading one in technical and production, I would be really glad if you consider me for this job ,so that I can show my talent and knowledge in the required field. I would be looking forward to giving an interview.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
Dear Sir/ Madam,
As I grew older, I got interested in studying civil engineering, simultaneously, fixing my goal for severing the humanity through its numerous areas scattered over the world. Thus, I studied harder and got admission in the most reputed engineering institution of my city,ABCD university. In second year of my engineering, I started developing thirst for learning construction, planning and management. I also acquired knowledge of some relevant software in parallel. My undergraduate program came to an end in 2013 when I passed successfully with first division. I came to know about this wonderful' Management Trainee job' through a social networking site.
I am sure I am the right candidate for handling the responsibilities of this job determinedly. I was appointed as a 'Trainee Engineer' at a private builder, where I gained experience of approximately a year in residential construction work, including quantity, cost estimation and quality assurance. I have the eagerness and following expertise required to carry out the job properly:
1) Knowledge of drafting and planning software like, AutoCad 2D and 3D, and Primavera P6 respectively.
2) Billing and quantity estimation in construction work.
3) Experience in construction site supervision.
As your organization is one of the world's leading one in technical and production, I would be really glad if you consider me for this job ,so that I can show my talent and knowledge in the required field. I would be looking forward to giving an interview.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
Top answer
) humanity all over the world. Thus, I studied hard and gained admission to the most reputable engineering institution of my city,ABCD University. In my second year of engineering, I started developing a thirst for learning construction, planning, and management.
- ) humanity all over the world.
- Thus, I studied hard and gained admission to the most reputable engineering institution of my city,ABCD University.
- In my second year of engineering, I started developing a thirst for learning construction, planning, and management.
- I also acquired knowledge of some relevant software in parallel.
- My undergraduate program came to an end in 2013 when I passed in the first division of the university (not sure what you mean) .
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
2 Answers
0
Dear Sir or Madam,
I became interested in studying civil engineering while setting my goal for severing (Do you mean serving?) humanity all over the world. Thus, I studied hard and gained admission to the most reputable engineering institution of my city,ABCD University. In my second year of engineering, I started developing a thirst for learni
I became interested in studying civil engineering while setting my goal for severing (Do you mean serving?) humanity all over the world. Thus, I studied hard and gained admission to the most reputable engineering institution of my city,ABCD University. In my second year of engineering, I started developing a thirst for learni
00
Dear Sir/Madam,
As I grew older, I got interested in studying civil engineering , simultaneously, fixing my goal for as a way of severing the humanity through its numerous areas scattered all over the world. Thus, I studied hard er and got admitted ssion into the most reputed
0
Related Questions