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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Please help meorfanizetgis sentence: I would be interested in speaking with you further to discuss the value my potential can bring to your firm.
  

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Unless you are applying to be the CEO of this company, you should make this sound less arrogant in tone. eg I would be grateful for an opportunity to discuss with you how my skills can contribute to your firm. Clive

  • Unless you are applying to be the CEO of this company, you should make this sound less arrogant in tone.
  • eg I would be grateful for an opportunity to discuss with you how my skills can contribute to your firm.
  • Clive
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Unless you are applying to be the CEO of this company, you should make this sound less arrogant in tone.

eg I would be grateful for an opportunity to discuss with you how my skills can contribute to your firm.

Clive
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Anonymousmeorfanizetgis
Spectacular typo!
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Anonymousmeorfanizetgis
This is apparently an exclamation - like "oh heck!" or "oh shoot!" or "**** it!"

(Sorry -- couldn't resist pasting in a comment from a completely different thread.)

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