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Emres Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Hello,

I have to give following speech_

Hello class,
currently I watch 10 different television series. I like watching series, more than films. You have entertainment for a longer period of time and you always can’t await the next episode. So, there is always tension. I specially like American or Turkish series, but German productions not at all. There are some differences between Turkish and American or German TV series. Here you see a poster of a Turkish series. The name of the series is “Intikam” and means “revenge”. And yes, this series based on the American series “revenge”. I want to tell you a bit about the story of Intikam. In Intikam Yagmur Özden buys a house next to the Arsoys family mansion. Yagmur is really Derin Celik, whose father, Adil Celik, was sentenced to life imprisonment for a non-committed crime when she was a little girl. Because of the imprisonment, Derin and her father were separated and he died as a result of an attack. As an adult, Derin alias Yagmur wants to revenge everyone who were involved in the conspiracy of her father. Her primary target is Sahika, leader of the Arsoy family, who loved and Derins's father and cheated on him. The running time of each episode is only 90 minutes, because most Turkish TV series have a running time between 120 and 150 Minutes. So it is, as if you watched a film in series. A season begins usually in September and ends usually in June, when the 3 months-holidays start in turkey. So, episodes and seasons are much longer. But that’s not all. At the beginning of each episode of American or German series, there is a short summarising flashback, but the flashbacks of Turkish series are much longer. Flashbacks are 30 to 60 minutes long. I find it handy, because you have no time to hang around every time in front of TV for 2 hours. I think everyone knows the primetime here in Germany. It’s the same in turkey but you have to remember the 1 hour time difference. Because a lot of Turks live outside Turkey especially in Germany, there are extra European or German versions of the Turkish series channels. The television program is the same but the television advertising is designed for the German market. So tv channels do business, even if foreigner watch TV. When we already talk about business: Turkish series are also very popular outside turkey. Some series were aired in about 60 different countries. Turkish TV series are especially popular in near east, but also in Europe and even in Asia, for example in China. Either a series is bought and translated or a new series is produced. FOX, for example, bought the rights of the Turkish series “SON” and will produce an own series called “Runner”. Runner will be aired in September this year in America. Rights were also sold to Russia and Germany, where the series will be aired in 2016.

Could someone look for grammar mistakes? Thank you!
  

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emres I have to give following speech _ I have to give the following speech . (There should be a full stop here) Your text would be further improved if you separate it into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so would make it much easier to read.

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emresI have to give following speech_
I have to give the following speech. (There should be a full stop here)

Your text would be further improved if you separate it into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so would make it much easier to read. Once you have done that, you can post it here aga
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Anonymous emresI have to give following speech_I have to give the following speech. (There should be a full stop here)Your text would be further improved if you separate it into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so would make it much easier to read. Once you have done that, you can post it here again and wait fore responses.
Hello class,

currently I wat
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emresYou have entertainment for a longer period of time and you always can’t await the next episode.
I am entertained for a longer period of time and can’t wait for the next episode.
emresI specially like American or Turkish series, but German productions not at all.
I especially like American or Turkish programs or programm

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