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Mateen hadir Posted 11 years ago
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I simplify the paragraph in my own words what are gramatical andd logical mistakes in it ??? Secondly,as a great patriot(lover of his country),Hamel tried to create feeling of love and respect in his pupils for the country.He talked of the glory of France, and, more to emphasize (stress) it, he wrote "France, Alsace" in different corners of class and "Long Live France" on the blackboard. Thirdly,Hamel was hopeful or optimistic lover of his language. He gave his listeners to understand that though Alsace in France had been occupied by Prussia, the French people could regain their independence through the power of their language. Fourthly, Hamel was a serious , philosophic teacher. he was fully mature after having taught for forty years and having seen all the ups and downs of national life and of his own life.For most of the lesson , he remained calm and did not become emotional . This gave weight and authority to his opinions. SIMPLIFICATION OF THE ABOVE PARAGRAPH ( Second, Hamel as a true patriot , wanted to produce love and patriotism among his students for his country. He talked about the glory of France, and to force on it , he wrote "France, Asace " every where and " Long Live France " on the blackboard. Third, Hamel was a hopeful and optimistic lover of his language. He educated to his listeners , although in France Alsace had gone in the hands of Germany. French people could get their freedom again by strength of their language . fourth, Hamel was aserious and philosophic teacher. After forty years teaching and after looking the ups and downs of his life , he was a man of mature thoughts. Mostly, he remained calm and emotionless in the lesson. This thing gave power and authority to his opinions.
  

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I've only corrected the second part of your text! Second, Hamel as a true patriot , wanted to nurture love and patriotism among his students for their country. He talked about the glory of France, and to reinforce that point, he wrote "France, Alsace " everywhere and "L ong Live Franc e" on the blackboard.

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  • I've only corrected the second part of your text!
  • Second, Hamel as a true patriot , wanted to nurture love and patriotism among his students for their country.
  • He talked about the glory of France, and to reinforce that point, he wrote "France, Alsace " everywhere and "L ong Live Franc e" on the blackboard.
  • Third, Hamel was a hopeful and optimistic lover of his language.
  • He taught his listeners that although Alsace had fallen to the hands of Germany, French people there could get their freedom again by the strength of their languag e.
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I've only corrected the second part of your text!

Second, Hamel as a true patriot , wanted to nurture love and patriotism among his students for their country. He talked about the glory of France, and to reinforce that point, he wrote "France, Alsace " everywhere and "Long Live France" on the blackboard.
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