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Lahori Posted 11 years ago
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Hi...please teachers check this and sort out my mistakes..

My supervisor gave us an assignment to visit and inspect the social welfare foundation. There was Mrs. Shaheen who welcome us warmly with her staff members. We sited in her office. Then she gave a brief introduction about social welfare foundation.
  

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My supervisor gave us an assignment to visit and inspect the social welfare foundation. There was Mrs. Shaheen who welcome d us warmly with her staff members.

  • My supervisor gave us an assignment to visit and inspect the social welfare foundation.
  • There was Mrs.
  • Shaheen who welcome d us warmly with her staff members.
  • We sat in her office.
  • Then she gave a brief introduction about the social welfare foundation.
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My supervisor gave us an assignment to visit and inspect the social welfare foundation. There was Mrs. Shaheen who welcomed us warmly with her staff members. We sat in her office. Then she gave a brief introduction about the social welfare foundation.

Better:
There was When we arrived, Mrs. Shaheen who welcomed us warmly with her staff

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