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She has suffered from Atrial Septal Defect by birth. At the age of 5 years doctors recommended her that she only took medicine which may be in heal the hole of her heart wall. She had also faced Rheumatic Heart Disease which could cure through antibiotics. She came to PIC of the proper treatment of her disease when she was 17 years old. Doctors recommended her Echo test and changed her medicines. By seen her Echo report they have recommended her surgery of ASD.
She has suffered from Atrial Septal Defect by birth. At the age of 5 years doctors recommended her that she only took medicine which may be in heal the hole of her heart wall. She had also faced Rheumatic Heart Disease which could cure through antibiotics. She came to PIC of the proper treatment of her disease when she was 17 years old. Doctors recommended her Echo test and changed her medicines. By seen her Echo report they have recommended her surgery of ASD.
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She has suffered from atrial septal defect (ASD) from birth. When she was 5 years old, doctors recommended that she take medicine to help heal the hole in her heart wall. She also faced rheumatic heart disease (RHD), which could be cured with antibiotics.
- She has suffered from atrial septal defect (ASD) from birth.
- When she was 5 years old, doctors recommended that she take medicine to help heal the hole in her heart wall.
- She also faced rheumatic heart disease (RHD), which could be cured with antibiotics.
- She came to PIC for proper treatment of her disease when she was 17 years old.
- Doctors recommended an echocardiographic stress test and changed her medication.
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She has suffered from atrial septal defect (ASD) from birth. When she was 5 years old, doctors recommended that she take medicine to help heal the hole in her heart wall. She also faced rheumatic heart disease (RHD), which could be cured with antibiotics. She came to PIC for proper treatment of her disease when she was 17 years old. Doctors recommended an echocardiographic stress test and chang
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