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Hi I wrote this passage but I have doubts about the bold parts.How do you change them?

"During six years of my education in veterinary medicine ,I have learned that one of the biggest purpose of my education was learning knowledge that they helped us to know, how to rear and manage healthy animals for providing healthy food for the human diet.In this respect,I have been learned by many studies that they were specifically designated to help students to reach the goal of producing, processing and distributing healthy animal source foods."

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

A person does not learn knowledge.
They learn facts to gain knowledge. Knowledge is the sum total of what you know. You can increase your knowledge, but you cannot learn it.

Usually you have a purpose. It is a goal that you have. You do not learn goals, objectives and purposes, but you desire them. My purpose in practicing the piano 5 hours a day is to be able to give a perfect concert.

There are grammatical errors in the non-bold parts of your passage, too.

You might write things like this:

I learned how to raise animals for human consumption, from breeding and raising young animals, to slaughtering and distribution. At every step, health and safety is essential so that the meat products will be fit for humans to eat.
I learned about animal diseases and how to treat them.
I studied all aspects of animal husbandry.

RONIN1987 · Answer

Thank you AlpheccaStars

Just one question.Do you have animal source food and plant derived foods in English?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

We have meat products (food derived from animals) and fruits, grains and vegetables. I don't know that there is one word meaning "food derived from plants" except maybe vegetable products.

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