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Eddy79 Posted 12 years ago
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My Dear, I hope you would help me with this Cover letter for master in business administration. I have only two days left to close the program. It should answer the following questions:
1. What is your motivation in applying to the MBA at this stage in life?
2. What are your long-term career goals (and why)?
3. How did you manage to accomplish important goals in your career? Please, describe
4. How did you handle a professional failure and how did you deal with its consequences? Please, describe. And here is my Letter:
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to apply for the Master of Business Administration in design, Fashion and Luxury goods. AS an architect and interior designer, I’ve always been fascinated by art and fashion, especially the interior luxury furniture and accessories. Moreover, I’m always been looking forward to set up my own brand and put a trend mark in fashion and luxury goods.
After I graduated from architecture faculty of Aleppo University in 2006, I set up my own business and run out a small company for architecture and interior design, but after 6 years when the civil war broke up in Syria I lost my business. However, in September 2012, I decided to move to Dubai and to start over again. Recently, I’m working as a head architect for fit out company.
At this stage in my life and in such an international environment as a Dubai city, I feel that I need to upgrade my education in the field of business, especially on international scale. Therefore, I can be able to go further in my business career and to achieve my goals.
Italy is known as a country of art, fashion and design, besides it has a lot of successful famous companies in these sectors. Therefore, I believe to obtain such as a master from Italian university combined with my professional experience that will allow me to accomplish my goals and steer a successful company in my filed one day.
I had some professional failure but I always tend to turn a negative experience into a learning experience and to double the effort and work harder to deal with their consequences.
I am confident that the Master of Business Administration in design, Fashion and Luxury goods offered by Alma Graduate School will provide me the knowledge, confidence, and contacts to realize my dreams.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Sincerely yours,
Firas Edelbi
  

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  • " Here are some suggestions.
  • ) Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the Master of Business Administration in design, F ashion and L uxury goods.
  • A S an architect and interior designer, I’ve always been fascinated by art and fashion, especially the interior luxury furniture and accessories.
  • Moreover, I’m always been looking forward to set up my own brand and set put a trend mark in fashion and luxury goods.
  • After I graduated from the architecture faculty of Aleppo University in 2006, I set up my own business and run out a small company for architecture and interior design, but after 6 years when the civil war broke out up in Syria I lost my business.
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Hi Eddy;

Please do not address people (except your wife or husband or mother) as "dear." Here are some suggestions. Highlighted words have problems (capitalization, spelling, etc.)

Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to apply for the Master of Business Administration in design, Fashion and L
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Hi my friend. I really appreciate your help a lot. Thanks
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Hi, Eddy. As usual, AlpheccaStars has provided solid advice.
A couple of suggestions:
I’m looking forward to setting up my own brand... or I hope to establish my own brand... or My goal is to establish my own brand... etc.

...in such an international environment as Dubai,

I feel that I need to upgrade my educa
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Hi Blue jay,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to thank you for all the guidance and advice regarding writing my motivation letter.
Best regards,
Eddy
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Wish you do nicely. I'd like in order to thanks for all your assistance as well as guidance concerning composing my personal inspiration notice.

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