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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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I am asking a friend the state of his company - a business. Does what I ask below make sense? Could it be rewritten more clearly?

This is excellent news John but I what of your company?
  

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Anonymous Does what I ask below make sense? No. Anonymous Could it be rewritten more clearly?

  • Anonymous Does what I ask below make sense?
  • No.
  • Anonymous Could it be rewritten more clearly?
  • Yes: This is excellent news, John, but what of your company?
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Anonymous Does what I ask below make sense?
No.
AnonymousCould it be rewritten more clearly?
Yes: This is excellent news, John, but what of your company?

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