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Is this sentence grammatically correct or not?thanks in advance((Here,there is an oriental look on death rather thanto be interpreted as decay and nonexistence))

Clive · Accepted Answer

No.
Try to say it another way.

Why do you say 'Here'?
Look on not correct. Perhaps you mean view of.

Clive

Anonymous · Answer

I am translating a context and it says,here...Dear Clive will you please check it and tell me where are the mistakes.???thanks again and again

The director point of view
With a modern and free looking on a few anecdotes of the Rumi master
pieces and his worthy Masnavi, we tried to have a new approach to the
subject of death. Here,there is an oriental look on death rather than
to be interpreted as decay and nonexistence . An approach which
derives from our archaic books. The oriental view on death is poetic
and take the audience through a new world which has not been
experienced by him till now.

Clive · Answer

Translations are difficult. I'll just try to make a much sense as I can of this.

I'll put question marks after anything that is still strange.

The director ??? point of view

With a modern and free look at a few anecdotes ?? about Rumi's ???? masterpieces and his worthy Masnavi ???, we have tried to have a new approach to the subject of death. Here,there is an oriental view of death rather than an interpretation of it as decay and nonexistence. This is an approach which derives from our ancient books. The oriental view of death is poetic, and takes the reader through a new world which has not been experienced by him till now.

Anonymous · Answer

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