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TinaMr Posted 12 years ago
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Could you have a look at these 3 sentences and give me your opinion on my mistakes:
"Much as a constitution of any country claims that equal opportunities should be given to all its citizens, the reality is far from this highly desired wish. There are various forms of inequality, for instance between men and women, different races, high and low income families. Undoubtedly, it is difficult to achieve equal opportunities, but as people say: "If there is a will, there is a way".
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
  

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The constitutions of many countries claim that equal opportunity should be given to all their citizens, the reality is quite different. There are various forms of inequality—for instance between sexes, races, and incomes. "

— Mister Micawber

  • The constitutions of many countries claim that equal opportunity should be given to all their citizens, the reality is quite different.
  • There are various forms of inequality—for instance between sexes, races, and incomes.
  • "
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The constitutions of many countries claim that equal opportunity should be given to all their citizens, the reality is quite different. There are various forms of inequality—for instance between sexes, races, and incomes. Undoubtedly, it is difficult to achieve equal opportunity, but as the saying goes, "If there's a will, there's a way."
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Mister Micawber, thank you soooooo much!!! There were some parts (i.e. " far from this highly desired wish", "people say") I didn't like at all, but didn't know how to edit.
Thank you very much, once again!
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