0
Fatima55 Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary

Does it make sense? Analysis of the reflective journals written by the learners also showed the positive role of journal writing in the development of learner's writing skills.
  

Top answer

It sounds a little bit wordy and repetitive. I suggest eg Analysis of the learners' reflective journals also showed their positive role in the development of writing skills. Clive

  • It sounds a little bit wordy and repetitive.
  • I suggest eg Analysis of the learners' reflective journals also showed their positive role in the development of writing skills.
  • Clive
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
It sounds a little bit wordy and repetitive.
I suggest
eg Analysis of the learners' reflective journals also showed their positive role in the development of writing skills.

Clive

Related Questions