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Lahori Posted 12 years ago
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Hi. someone check my this paraphrase of this paragraph? Thanks in advance.
Vitamin C in large doses not only protects against the common cold, but also offers considerable protection against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial. I believe that Vitamin C in adequate amounts could considerable decreases the incidence and severity of the flu.

Vitamin C in large amount not only protects against the common cold, but also fling considerable security against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial. I believe that Vitamin C in adequate amounts could considerable decreases the incidence and severness of the flu .
  

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Vitamin C in large amounts not only protects against the common cold, but also gives considerable security against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial. I believe that Vitamin C in adequate amounts could considerably decrease the incidence and severeness of the flu. Your paraphrase is not very comprehensive; I hope this is not homework.

  • Vitamin C in large amounts not only protects against the common cold, but also gives considerable security against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial.
  • I believe that Vitamin C in adequate amounts could considerably decrease the incidence and severeness of the flu.
  • Your paraphrase is not very comprehensive; I hope this is not homework.
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Vitamin C in large amounts not only protects against the common cold, but also gives considerable security against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial. I believe that Vitamin C in adequate amounts could considerably decrease the incidence and severeness of the flu.

Your paraphrase is not very comprehensive; I hope this is not homework.
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Thanks sir but my teacher said the words I, we or noun not used in Paraphrase. As i use the word "I believe" this is correct?
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lahoriMy teacher said the words I, we or noun not used in Paraphrase. As i use the word "I believe" this is correct?
No, not if your teacher said, "No 'I'"!

Vitamin C in large amounts not only protects against the common cold, but also gives considerable security against other infectious diseases, bother viral and bacterial. It is believed t

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