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Ng Dg M Trg Posted 12 years ago
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I just took the writing exam this morning. It requires me to write a cause-effect essay with a question:How do social networks affect people's life? My thesis statement is the social networks have an effect on your life, your study and your country. do you think this thesis statement is related to the above question? Does this statement have right grammar?
  

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Ng Dg M Trg do you think this thesis statement is related to the above question? Yes, but it simply restates the question. " You might think of a "how" answer that is something more specific.

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  • Ng Dg M Trg do you think this thesis statement is related to the above question?
  • Yes, but it simply restates the question.
  • " You might think of a "how" answer that is something more specific.
  • Your thesis seems to answer "What do social networks affect, not "how".
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Ng Dg M Trgdo you think this thesis statement is related to the above question?
Yes, but it simply restates the question. "Social networks have an effect on your life."
You might think of a "how" answer that is something more specific. Your thesis seems to answer "What do social networks affect, not "how".
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so your opinion is that thesis statement is related to the question, right?
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i just mentioned it in my body paragraphs, so the thesis I just gave main points to get attention
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Ng Dg M Trg so your opinion is that thesis statement is related to the question, right?
If a statement restates the question, of course it is related.
But your thesis seemed to answer the question "what do social network affect in people's lives?", not the question "how do social networks affect people's lives?"
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I see! By the way, thank you so much
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