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Charles686 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Hello dear all! would you please read the text below for any grammar mistakes and you may correct it. Thank you so much!!!
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The last time I visited the faculty to ask about what I can do for my re-admission to be accepted, they told me about working in architectural company and submit an employment history at my faculty after working.
As I was working before and I quit after six months to continue with English language program, so by the time I was informed about working I decided to go first where I was working to ask them if they may provide me with an employment history or otherwise I may try to find another company and work for them. Finally after having a conversation with my boss, He helped me with a letter.
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The last time I visited the faculty to ask about what I can do for my re-admission to be accepted, they told me about working in architectural company and submit an employment history at my faculty after working.
As I was working before and I quit after six months to continue with English language program, so by the time I was informed about working I decided to go first where I was working to ask them if they may provide me with an employment history or otherwise I may try to find another company and work for them. Finally after having a conversation with my boss, He helped me with a letter.
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The last time I visited the faculty to inquire about re-admission, they suggested that I find work in an architectural firm and then submit that employment history to my faculty. Actually, I was working before but had quit in order to continue with the English language program. When I was offered this suggestion, I went to my former employers to ask if they would provide me with a reference, and they supplied me with a reference letter.
- The last time I visited the faculty to inquire about re-admission, they suggested that I find work in an architectural firm and then submit that employment history to my faculty.
- Actually, I was working before but had quit in order to continue with the English language program.
- When I was offered this suggestion, I went to my former employers to ask if they would provide me with a reference, and they supplied me with a reference letter.
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The last time I visited the faculty to inquire about re-admission, they suggested that I find work in an architectural firm and then submit that employment history to my faculty.
Actually, I was working before but had quit in order to continue with the English language program. When I was offered this suggestion, I went to my former employers to ask if they would provide me with
Actually, I was working before but had quit in order to continue with the English language program. When I was offered this suggestion, I went to my former employers to ask if they would provide me with
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