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Random95 Posted 14 years ago
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Hello! Could you tell if that paragraph is right?
In my point of view, the power to choose depends on us-human beings. Everyone wants to achieve their goals in this life and the way to reaching it is heavy and tough. It can only be fulfilled by working hard. Should you believe in fulfilling it then it will come true with certainty. For example, we have the power to choose what kinds of food we eat and consequently it will determine our health to a great extent.
In my point of view, the power to choose depends on us-human beings. Everyone wants to achieve their goals in this life and the way to reaching it is heavy and tough. It can only be fulfilled by working hard. Should you believe in fulfilling it then it will come true with certainty. For example, we have the power to choose what kinds of food we eat and consequently it will determine our health to a great extent.
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Hi It's a good paragraph. The points to look at are... " us-human - I think you need spaces here.
- Hi It's a good paragraph.
- The points to look at are...
- " us-human - I think you need spaces here.
- When the "-" is used without spaces, it means a kind of phrase (like four-wheeled carriage).
- But "us-human" isn't a phrase.
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It's a good paragraph. The points to look at are...
"In my point of view..." - I would say "From my point of view..."
us-human - I think you need spaces here. When the "-" is used without spaces, it means a kind of phrase (like four-wheeled carriage). But "us-human" isn't a phrase. I would write something with spaces...
- It depends on us - human beings -
It's a good paragraph. The points to look at are...
"In my point of view..." - I would say "From my point of view..."
us-human - I think you need spaces here. When the "-" is used without spaces, it means a kind of phrase (like four-wheeled carriage). But "us-human" isn't a phrase. I would write something with spaces...
- It depends on us - human beings -
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