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Random95 Posted 14 years ago
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Hello! Are those sentences right ?
And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school. General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children. We should snap at our heels to make some forceful changes in order to touch up our school system in the field of sporting facilities and the whole educational curriculum so that pupils will be well prepared for the future.
And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school. General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children. We should snap at our heels to make some forceful changes in order to touch up our school system in the field of sporting facilities and the whole educational curriculum so that pupils will be well prepared for the future.
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You seem to have a poor understanding of idioms, and most of those do not belong in a written essay. I have underlined some problem areas for you to fix: And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school. General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children.
- You seem to have a poor understanding of idioms, and most of those do not belong in a written essay.
- I have underlined some problem areas for you to fix: And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school.
- General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children.
- We should snap at our heels to make some forceful changes in order to touch up our school system in the field of sporting facilities and the whole educational curriculum so that pupils will be well prepared for the future.
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You seem to have a poor understanding of idioms, and most of those do not belong in a written essay. I have underlined some problem areas for you to fix:
And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school. General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children. We should snap a
And last but not the least, the problem with the deficiency of proper facilities in this high school. General research shows that it's high time we took care of our children. We should snap a
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