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Vibhanu Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?
-That awesome moment when your best pal replies you,after giving him too much of a burden whole day through,"Go to hell"
  

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Everything inside the red brackets is subordinate. That awesome moment ( when your best pal replies you,after giving him too much of a burden whole day through,"Go to ****" ) If you want to revise and repost, we can discuss the other problems. Clive

— Clive

  • Everything inside the red brackets is subordinate.
  • That awesome moment ( when your best pal replies you,after giving him too much of a burden whole day through,"Go to ****" ) If you want to revise and repost, we can discuss the other problems.
  • Clive
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Hi,

This has a number of problems, but the main problem is that you have no main verb
.Everything inside the red brackets is subordinate.
That awesome moment ( when your best pal replies you,after giving him too much of a burden wh
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Can you tell me what would be the appropriate way to express this idea?
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How about this? That awesome moment your pest pal replies you,after giving him too much of a burden,"Go to ****"
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Please tell me about other problems too.It would be a great help.Thank you
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Hi,

You need to review basic sentence structure.

Let's consider simpler examples.
Do you understand why 'The moment' is not a valid sentence?
Do you understand why 'The moment when the phone
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Yeah I understand.But these types of sentences are often used in social networks like FB.That's why I asked this question

Cheers.
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What's about the subordinate sentence? Is it also wrong?
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Hi,

. . . when your best pal tells you, after you give him a hard time all day, "Go to ****".

In social network English, does anyone really care whether your English is correct?

Clive
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