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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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However, less money and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs meant a lot of conflict in his life.
  

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Hi, However, less money and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs meant a lot of conflict in his life. Commas would make it easier to understand. However, less money , and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs , meant a lot of conflict in his life.

  • Hi, However, less money and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs meant a lot of conflict in his life.
  • Commas would make it easier to understand.
  • However, less money , and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs , meant a lot of conflict in his life.
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Hi,

However, less money and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs meant a lot of conflict in his life.

Commas would make it easier to understand.

However, less money,
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Anonymous However, less money and record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafarian messages in his songs meant a lot of conflict in his life.
The two subjects connected by 'and' are too unlike to make a smooth sentence.

However,
[less money] < only two words
and
[record producers wanting him to compromise on his Rastafaria

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