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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
English in Russia
Привет, очень нужна помощь!!!! Пожалуйста, откорректируйте. Заранее спасибо.
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She’s standing at the window and looking at the white drifting clouds floating away.
He’s sitting on the sofa and carefully studying something on the I-phone.
She, “I’m not coming back…”
He (not even looking up from the I-phone) ,
“Wait! I'll make you some coffee ...”
She, “Your coffee machine is automatic”, smiled and added, “ Just press a button. Coffee was ready five minutes ago ...”
He (looking up from the I-phone and looking up at her), “Don’t hurry. I'm warming up the car. It’s cold outside ...”
She: “Recently you added a Remote Start to my car. Just push the button. I warm up the car…”
He(getting up), ”I‘ll help you to get down. The stair steps are steep “
She , “Don’t worry, darling. I’m not wearing long dress ...”
He, “ .... What do you want?”
She, “ To hear you…
To listen with you the song of wind and noise of rain…
Totalk to you.
To talk to you about the see… About the track of moonlight ...
about the falling stars ... About your and my filling …
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She’s standing at the window and looking at the white drifting clouds floating away.
He’s sitting on the sofa and carefully studying something on the I-phone.
She, “I’m not coming back…”
He (not even looking up from the I-phone) ,
“Wait! I'll make you some coffee ...”
She, “Your coffee machine is automatic”, smiled and added, “ Just press a button. Coffee was ready five minutes ago ...”
He (looking up from the I-phone and looking up at her), “Don’t hurry. I'm warming up the car. It’s cold outside ...”
She: “Recently you added a Remote Start to my car. Just push the button. I warm up the car…”
He(getting up), ”I‘ll help you to get down. The stair steps are steep “
She , “Don’t worry, darling. I’m not wearing long dress ...”
He, “ .... What do you want?”
She, “ To hear you…
To listen with you the song of wind and noise of rain…
Totalk to you.
To talk to you about the see… About the track of moonlight ...
about the falling stars ... About your and my filling …
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Top answer
Is it a script for a movie? I wouldn't dare attempt to correct it, but the punctuation definitely seems a little off, even in Russian. I would write the first sentence like this: She is at the window, looking at the white clouds drifting away.
- Is it a script for a movie?
- I wouldn't dare attempt to correct it, but the punctuation definitely seems a little off, even in Russian.
- I would write the first sentence like this: She is at the window, looking at the white clouds drifting away.
- Maybe you should replace the word carefully with attentively in the second sentence.
- /feelings (not fillings)/ sea (not see).
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Is it a script for a movie? I wouldn't dare attempt to correct it, but the punctuation definitely seems a little off, even in Russian. I would write the first sentence like this: She is at the window, looking at the white clouds drifting away.Maybe you should replace the word carefully with attentively in the second sentence. Also without looking up from his c
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Agarista, thank you very much for your comment.
It isn't a script for a movie. The same style. I created it as an expression of my feeling. But I need a translation of that
It isn't a script for a movie. The same style. I created it as an expression of my feeling. But I need a translation of that
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I like what you have written, especially the Russian version, it is interesting. I wished I could help you, unfortunately though my English isn't that good. But don't despair
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She’s standing at the window and looking at the whited
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She’s standing at the window and looking at the white
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Evorie, ??????? ??????? ?? ??????.
Agarista, ??????? ?? ????? ????? ? ???? ????????? )) ?????????, ???????? ?? ????????? ??, ??? ??????? ???????? ??????. ???????, ?????????? ))
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Svetlana Popova
Agarista, ??????? ?? ????? ????? ? ???? ????????? )) ?????????, ???????? ?? ????????? ??, ??? ??????? ???????? ??????. ???????, ?????????? ))
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Svetlana Popova
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