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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Where would I place the comma(s) in this sentence? The immigrants were assigned numbers and were forced to submit their bodies to the pokings and proddings of silent nurses and doctors.
  

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Hi, First, can you tel us your thoughts about this, please? Clive

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Hi,

First, can you tel us your thoughts about this, please?

Clive
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No commas at all.
The word 'silent' does not seem suggestive enough; how about 'taciturn' or 'brusque'?
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Oops! Sorry, Clive. I was searching my thesaurus.
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