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Random95 Posted 14 years ago
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Hello! Could you tell me if those sentences are right?
For my own part, it is unfair to diminish the value of fathers.They go to great lengths to find the best way to create a family. It is one of the most responsible and important stages in a man's life.I would like to describe a person who is the perfect example of being an excellent parent-my father David.
  

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In my opinion, it is unfair to diminish the value of fathers : th ey go to great lengths to find the best way to sustain a family. It is one of the most responsible and important stages in a man's life. I would like to describe a perfect example of an excellent pare nt: my own father.

  • In my opinion, it is unfair to diminish the value of fathers : th ey go to great lengths to find the best way to sustain a family.
  • It is one of the most responsible and important stages in a man's life.
  • I would like to describe a perfect example of an excellent pare nt: my own father.
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In my opinion, it is unfair to diminish the value of fathers: they go to great lengths to find the best way to sustain a family. It is one of the most responsible and important stages in a man's life. I would like to describe a perfect example of an excellent parent: my own father.

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