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Tapas Lover Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

A wrong step would bring bad consequences, it will cause the loss of your health. Losing a woman resembles losing a family.

Is there anything wrong with that? Thanks.
  

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Tapas Lover A wrong step would bring bad consequences, it will cause the loss of your health. Losing a woman resembles losing a family. You have the error called "comma splice".

— CalifJim

  • Tapas Lover A wrong step would bring bad consequences, it will cause the loss of your health.
  • Losing a woman resembles losing a family.
  • You have the error called "comma splice".
  • You have connected two independent sentences with a comma instead of writing them as two sentences.
  • The passage also lacks coherence.
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Tapas LoverA wrong step would bring bad consequences, it will cause the loss of your health. Losing a woman resembles losing a family.
You have the error called "comma splice". You have connected two independent sentences with a comma instead of writing them as two sentences. The passage also lacks coherence. The third sentence doesn't seem very closely rel
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Thanks. It makes so much sense now.
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