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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Did I write this correctly?

He holds certifications for International Baccalaureate Social and Cultural Anthropology, and has led workshops for the IBO on the effectiveness of Anticipatory Sets as well as Service-Learning and CAS.

Thanks for any help. Service-Learning and CAS is a class.
  

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Hi. I would amend it as below; Have I written this correctly? He holds certificates for International Baccalaureate Social and Cultural Anthropology.

— Hrsanei

  • Hi.
  • I would amend it as below; Have I written this correctly?
  • He holds certificates for International Baccalaureate Social and Cultural Anthropology.
  • Furthermore, he has offered workshops for the IBO on the effectiveness of Anticipatory Sets as well as Service-Learning and CAS.
  • I think the second opinion would also help.
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Hi.
I would amend it as below;

Have I written this correctly?
He holds certificates for International Baccalaureate Social and Cultural Anthropology. Furthermore, he has offered workshops for the IBO on the effectiveness of Anticipatory
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That does sound better. Thank you!
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